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Text is Copyright © 2017 by Jason H. Abbott, All Rights Reserved. Art elements are original, open source, or in the public domain.
OH! Ha ha. I love this. What a great twist. LOL.
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Thanks! This one was tricky to word right, but worth the effort! I enjoyed getting those last words to flip everything, and how it can be taken as scary, sad, funny or a combination of the three. :-)
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Yes. Lots of ways to interpret, I agree. I was delighted with the storytelling, the concept, the twist. I would make a great first paragraph in a short story. Talk about a hook :-)
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Reblogged this on Kate McClelland.
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Glad you enjoyed! :-)
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Really well written and good story, but then all of your writing is :0)
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