Fifty Word Fantasy: The Bed

6 thoughts on “Fifty Word Fantasy: The Bed”

D. Wallace Peach says:

April 28, 2017 at 13:08

OH! Ha ha. I love this. What a great twist. LOL.

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1. Jason H. Abbott says:
  
  April 28, 2017 at 13:57
  
  Thanks! This one was tricky to word right, but worth the effort! I enjoyed getting those last words to flip everything, and how it can be taken as scary, sad, funny or a combination of the three. :-)
  
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  1. D. Wallace Peach says:
    
    April 28, 2017 at 14:15
    
    Yes. Lots of ways to interpret, I agree. I was delighted with the storytelling, the concept, the twist. I would make a great first paragraph in a short story. Talk about a hook :-)
    
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Kate McClelland says:

April 30, 2017 at 11:04

Reblogged this on Kate McClelland.

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1. Jason H. Abbott says:
  
  April 30, 2017 at 12:35
  
  Glad you enjoyed! :-)
  
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  1. Kate McClelland says:
    
    April 30, 2017 at 15:13
    
    Really well written and good story, but then all of your writing is :0)
    
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